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Post by Firefoot on Oct 5, 2005 11:06:10 GMT -5
I am bored because of no school and all so i am going to make a story! ^^ Here are the cats that are going to be in it.
Leader: Lionstar, Light tanish tom
Deputy: Firefoot, Big black tom with flame red paws
Med cat: Tigerleaf, Nice light brown tabby she-cat
Warriors: Graytail, Light gray she-cat Apprentice Rumblepaw Blackstorm, Very mean black tom Apprentice Redpaw Whitelily, A very friendly white she-cat Grasswind, swift tan tabby tom Apprentice Ravenpaw Shyheart, A very shy black she-cat
Apprentices: Redpaw, A redish orange tom Rumblepaw, Nice gray/brown she-cat Ravenpaw, Grayish black tom
Queens: Nightflower, Very petty White and black she-cat
Kits: Mintykit, Pure white with a black tip tail she-kit Sandykit, light tanish like sand she-kit Windkit (The star of the show xP), Light brown with light gray stipes tom. Darkit, Pure black tom Silverkit, Light silver, She-cat
(I used some of my friends names as you see xP Minty and Sandy xD Anyways hope you like the story! I am working on it right now! post it in a few mins!)
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Post by Firefoot on Oct 5, 2005 11:06:46 GMT -5
Windkit is telling this story not me ^^)
Ok my story starts in a small den whith my mother, I loved my mother. She was as sweet as a flower. Her name was Nightflower. I did not look anything like her. I was brownish gray and she was pure black! But I did not mind I stilled loved her. To think about it the only kit that looked like mom was darkkit my brother. My other sisters, Sandykit and Mintykit, did not look like mom. Oh how I ove my brother and sisters! We used to have so much fun playing. Sandykit was always hoging everthing but I would take care of it. I would play attack her and we would roll over and over till she gave in and stoping hoging. It was alot of fun. Mintykit she was always trying to help. She did not like it when we where play fight and sometimes got a little mad. So we would sneek up onto Mintykit, Me and Sandykit, and then when she was not looking, Jump onto her. Mintykit would be so sacred she would yowl and mom would tell use to stop. But we always loved mintykit.
One night we would geting ready for bed when there was something outside the den. I got up and hissed standing in fround of my sisters. Darkit got up with me. Darkkit was so brave. I new he would be a nice warrior someday. The sound got closer and closer till a head poked up into the den. It was dad! Oh I love dad. His name was Grasswind. He was as swift as the water in a river. Dad always loved to play with us and sometimes let us go out of the den. But mom would not let us be gone for a long time. So we would have to go back into the den. I loved my fmaily so much. There where great. I dont know what i would do without then. Me and my brother and sister's had a close boned. When we were curled up together it was the most warnest feeling ever! I never want to leave the warn feeling of Sandykit,Minty, and Darkit's fur. There fur was as soft as snow in a cold morning.
One day we woke up to a load, BOOM! I jumped up in fear shakeing from my head to my tail. Mintykit and Sandykit where by me. Sandykit put her nose into my fur shakeing. Mom got us together and hide us in the back of the den as she wnet out to see what had happend. We heard a loud "NO!" and then again a big BOOM! Sandykit meowed in fear and Mintykit was with Darkit. They where all shakeing wildly. I tolled them to stay put. I slowly walked to the end of the den and looked out. There I saw a Twoleg with a gum. I looked onto the ground and there I saw Mom, She was dead, Shot. I tryed not to cry. I had to be brave for my family. But where was everboby? Hideing in the dens I would think. But how long can they hide? I know Twolegs are smart. Just then the Twoleg looked over at me and started to walk over to me. I tryed to back away but I fet like I was glue to the ground in fear. The twoleg picked me up. I tryed to get away but before I could I was put into a bag and there I did not know what would happen..
Ok so here I was in a bag crying my head off. The twoleg put me into a small cage in a big green truck. I cryed and cryed but it was usely. Just then I saw a brown cat. It was my dad! And behine him there was three kits. It was Sandykit, Mintykit, and Darkit! "Help!" I cryed. "DOnt let him take me away!" The truck started up. "Daddy!" The truck started to drive away. Dad chased the truck with all of Starclan with him but could not get to him in time. I watched as he got smaller and smaller. "No!" I cryed. I was lost and sacred now. I did not know what was going to happen to me. All I hoped was to see my family again. I curled up on the hard cold floor of the cage and fell asleep.
I woke up in a biger cage with sound of all kinds of Animals around me. There was twolegs raning all over the place. I saw a big dog not far away in a cage. It growled at me and I backed away. Just then a Twoleg stoped by my cage and opened it. I hissed and clawed her hand away from me. But she soon grabed me by my neck and draged me out. She put me in this room and looked over me. I layed down shakeing. I missed my family more and more now. I want to be home. The lady grabed a sharp long thing. I hissed and puffed my fur out. I did not like the looks of whatever she had. The lady grabed me and held me down. I yowled in pain as she put that think into my back. As soon as she let me go I started to feel sleepy. I got dizzy and fell down.Everthing started to go black and soon I was in a deep sleep.
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Post by Firefoot on Oct 5, 2005 11:07:51 GMT -5
I woke up once again in a cage. I tryed to get up but I fell down. My tummy hurt badly and when I went to clean myself there was something that was ther that hurt so badly! I dont know what they did to me. Once again the smae lady walked over to look at me. I hissed in her face. She opened the cage and put me into a smaller cage again. I sighed and gave up. I was starting to feel sick. The lady put me into a car and i was buming up and down as she drove off. Soon we where are a house. It was big and red. The bigers thing I have seen! She put me in the house and opened the cage. I ran off under a chair. The lady smiled and then walked back out the door.
I saw something moveing not far away. It was white.I smelled the air but it was all funny to me. "Who are you!" I heard a growl. A big white she-cat walked over to me. She said her name was Snowbell. I tolled her I was Windkit and I was far from home. Snowbell did not seen very nice. She just ate and went to sleep. She was very fat too. Never in my life have I seen a fat cat like her! She was like the catziila! So I found a solf spot and layed down. I fell asleep dreaming of my family. Would I ever see them again? And what about my mom? She was dead now and I had to face it.
I woke up the next morning with snowbell in my face. She toll me if I want to get out of the house. I jumped up. I may get back to my family! Snowbell leaded me to a door and jumped up hiting a door thingy that was sticking out. The door opened! I yowled in joy. SNowbell growled at me telling me to get out, So i ran out the door and into the woods not far off. Just one thing.. I did not know where I was! I knew I was far from my clan but how far? The woods smeeled werid, Noting like home. So I started to walk into the werid woods, I started the quest to find my family. SOmething that may happen to end up with me dead. I did not care. I had to find my family if it was the last thing I did! So there I started.
Ok here I was in the woods and I heard this sound.. Like a hiss but not like a cat hiss. This long thing with a big head and now legs moved slowly over to me. I hissed and ran as fasted as i could. The thing with its long tail grabed my back foot. I fell down onto the hard ground. I bit deep into the thing's tail. It hissed more and tryed to bit me but I was to fast for it. It bit its own tail! As soon as he turn back onto me I leaped onto it and gave it a bit in its long neck. It's body went limp in my mouth. I smiled. Noting could hurt me now! I was brave little Windkit! I did it! So I once again started to go into the woods.
Will I was still on my way to find my clan when I say a little silver kit. I did not know who she was or what she was doing out her. I walked up to her and said hi. She said her name was Kin and her mom was a loner. She had some great story to tell me. WHen Night came I was starting to get really sleep. Kin said I could stay with her and her mom. She lead me to a small den underground. As soon as I walked in Kin's mom hissed wildly at me telling me to stay back. Kin toll her mom about me and soon her mom let me into the den. Kin layed down by me pushing her some kit fur into mine. It made me think about my brother and sisters again. Did they miss me? Who knows. I pushed my nose into Kin's fur and soo fell asleep. In my dreams a cat came to me. She was as Black as night but as petty as a flower. I jumped up with happness and ran over to her. It was my mom! She was happy to see me to but she had some bad news to tell me. She said something is happening in the woods.. My home is not salf anymore. It was up to me to save my home and my family.Hunter where killing many cats in the woods. they take the Kits and give then homes. I was lucky to have got away.Once she tolled me that she licked my head and slowly went away.
I woke up the next day with Kin over me. She had woke me up. I said I had to go but Kin would not let me. She said I can do it alone. She was comeing with me. I purred happly. I had found a true friend. So there we started on the quest to save my home.
A week had gone by before and we still did not see any thing but trees. We had got a mouse or to but we are not very good hunter because we are kits and all. We barely found any water but a little pond or two. We came up to a big redwood tree. Then it hit me. This is the big redwood tree not far from my home! We started to run as fast as we could. I was home! I had a new friend and now she could live with me in my clan! We got to the hill that went to the camp. I yowled in joy. We raced into the camp. I called my brother and sitser's name. Sandykit slowly put her head out of the den she was in. So did Mintykit. The cryed with joy jumped onto me. Then my dad saw me. He cryed in joy and ran over to me licking me. I was so happy to be home. I tolled then about Kin and how she had helped me. Kin became part of our clan. Her name was now Silverkit. But wheree was Darkit? He had yet to come see me. Darkkit slowly came out of the den. His green eyes seened to glow red with madness. He growled and then slowly walked back into the den. What happened to him? That you will found out later. I had my family back now. I slowly walked back up to dad. I forgot to tell him what Mom had said to me. he did not belive me! He said I was just sick from being hurgry or something. But then it happened. Once again.. I heard a big Boom.
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Post by propanetail on Jan 23, 2006 19:37:47 GMT -5
Your story touched me. It made me cry and angry
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Post by propanetail on Jan 24, 2006 17:22:09 GMT -5
That story is so good you could make a book out of it
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