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Post by »Déwy« on Oct 4, 2005 11:17:01 GMT -5
Name: DoveKit
Age:5 moons
Gender: She-Cat
Clan: Shadow
Rank:Kit
Description: White pelt with green eyes
Personality: She likes to keep to herself. She is also very shy and antisocial.
pic: on signature*
History: She was a loner until a fox pack found her families home, Dovekit was the only survivor. IC: DoveKit watched from a crack in a log in the shadows as a fox fought her father, Flame. Nearby her brother and sister, Dash and Rose , lay in a pool of blood. Moments later , the fox moved on to her mother,Ivy, and soon she was dead too. Dovekit stayed in the log for about a day until she came out. " mother!!!!" she screamed as she fell beside her body. Dovekit stayed with her dead family for a long time until she heard snarling. " oh no! they are back!" she yelled. She ran into the forest never to see her family again.
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Post by »Déwy« on Oct 4, 2005 22:38:39 GMT -5
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Post by bliss and ignorance™ on Oct 6, 2005 18:40:07 GMT -5
Not bad! You capitalized stuff ^^ [although you could have gone into a little more description.] Accepted.
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