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Post by »Déwy« on Oct 3, 2005 14:45:30 GMT -5
Name: Dewpaw Age: 6 moons Gender: she-cat Clan: shadow Rank: apprentice Personality: Shes the friendliest cat you'll ever meet. she never gets mad and shes always there for her friends picture: Description: white with ginger swirls and mystic amber eyes History: she was born in shadowclan IC: Dewpaw blinked her eyes open. around her ,fellow apprentices were quietly sleeping on their day off from training. i wish there was something to do today she thought to herself. i know! . ill catch the biggest mice ever !, for the elders and Aurasong. She quickly groomed herself and raced out of the den...... Dewpaw walked back into camp around sunhigh with two huge mice in her mouth . She nearly tripped over them as she laid one near the fern tunnel for Aurasong. after she gave them to the very eager elders , she went to go explore the forest..
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Post by Nighty on Oct 3, 2005 15:02:55 GMT -5
^.^ Dewy! I am gonna make a Nightpaw I think. ^.^
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Post by bliss and ignorance™ on Oct 3, 2005 16:34:43 GMT -5
You might work on your punctuation a little more, but this bio is better than your last. Accepted.
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Post by »Déwy« on Oct 3, 2005 16:37:06 GMT -5
well i tend to make errors , because i type so fast and i dont normally look them over. sorry if it annoys you
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Post by bliss and ignorance™ on Oct 3, 2005 16:40:38 GMT -5
^^ It's okay. But you ought to look your posts over.
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