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Post by »Déwy« on Oct 2, 2005 12:51:10 GMT -5
Name: Aurasong
Age: 15 moons
Gender: she-cat
Clan: shadow
Rank: newly made med.cat
Personality: very caring and sweet
Description: gray with black spots
History: she was born in shadowclan and trained as a warrior for two moons . but then she wanted to be a med cat so she trained until she was 13 moons.
IC: Aurasong padded into her den , her new home . Shafts of light came through the cracks of the rock cave. " now to pile up on supplies " she mewed. She padded out into her clearing and through the fern tunnel . As she walked through the forest , she listened to the songs of autumn. " Chervil,Marigold and ....." she mewed as she tried to remember what her mentor told her about herbs found near camp. " burdock root!" she shouted . Nearby thrushes burst through the trees chirping alarmingly. Aurasong purred and began digging into some chervil
Codeword: *taken out*
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Post by rusticstar on Oct 2, 2005 12:56:18 GMT -5
Dewy, could you make the bio a bit longer? And perhaps use capitals?
And you should probaly change the name. We already have a Jadestream and a Jadeclan.
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Post by »Déwy« on Oct 2, 2005 20:09:58 GMT -5
ok i changed it
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Post by rusticstar on Oct 2, 2005 20:17:02 GMT -5
I guess that's better... Accepted.
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