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Post by ~*Icey's gang*~ on Oct 1, 2005 23:46:39 GMT -5
Name: Opalheart
Age: 20 mooons
Gender: she-cat
Clan: ThunderClann
Rank: warrior
Personality: Opalheart is a very kind hearted she cat. She enjoys sun bathing. Her personality is one of a kind. She is by far the nicest she cat. She loves helping others. She is rarely sad, or upset. She enjoys life, and lives it to the fullest. She should be a medicine cat
Picture(optional): none yet^^
Description: She is a silver tabby, with unusual dark stripes. Opalheart's orbs are a crystal blue. Her pelt is always well groomed. She is a tidy cat. She will always look her best, but is not vain.
History: She belongs to a totally different forest. Sadly, her family and clan died froma horiible diease. She couldn't save them, she was on her way to become a medicine cat, but never became one. She never got her sign form StarClan. She journeyed, and found a hime here, in ThunderClan.
IC: A silver she-cat stalked through the damp undergrowth. Her pelt glittering in the bright sunlight. Her paws tired, from her long journey. "Could this be...my new life, my new home...." she said hopefully. She took another few steps closer to the entrance. Her maw opened alittle to scent what was ahead of her. "Cats"she yelped happily. She took a couple more steps forward. "Would they accept me" she asked herself silentl. How would she make her approach.....
Codeword: *taken out*
Other: none^^
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Post by Blazie & Sooty on Oct 2, 2005 0:00:01 GMT -5
Umm you MUST be tired ... lol. Its not terrible but it could use some work. This bio I will accept, but if your next bio is like this I will bug you until it is perfect . lol.
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